SORROWI just feel so much guilt, That my words and actions built. I know, what I did was wrong, Tried to avoid it, and be strong. Following me has been the truth, It was hurting like a noose. I could not deny, Not apologizing was a lie. I'm so sorry, from deep inside, Clearly guilty, my hands are tied. It was obviously, all my fault, I'm sorry I have came to a hault.Cassidy M P2
I have opened the doorthat was in the basementThat said keep outBut I just couldnt I'm sorrydo you forgive meso darkso coldConor Smith P2
Cassidy's poem had a cool rhythm, but was nothing like the example. I did not know what you wanted the poem to look like, but Cassidy's poem was deffinetly clever. Every person has a differnt poetic side to them, but no offense "This is just to say" poem was something a 5 year old could think of. I personally think Cassidy's poem was 10 times better.Conor Smith P2
Fair Warning I have opened the doorthat was in the basementThat said keep outBut I just couldnt I'm sorrydo you forgive meso darkso coldConor Smith P2sorry i forgot the title in the first post
I personally like Cassidy's poem better than "This Is Just To Say." Cassidy's sounds more sophisticated and has more meaning to it. The one we read is, as Conor said, something a 5 year old could write. Conor's poem sounds more like he is sorry than the example, but overall, Cassidy's is very deep and clever. Rebecca W.
Not PerfectIm sorryfor not being perfectfor not listeningfor not loving youas much as i shouldforgive meJulia Watsky P2
Sorry© WhitestarI love you so very much,Even thou at times I do things that hurt,I try so hard to hope that you always see,How much you being in my life means to me,I am sorry yet again for causing you pain, that is the last thing I ever wanted to do,Even when I am trying to look out for you and do the right thing I mess up, I am sorry for that too.I hope that you still know how much I love and cherish you,Like nothing else in my life gives me the trill of being loved by you.So I hope that you listen and see it in my eyes, this sincere apology that comes with tears from deep inside.Source: Apologize Poem, Sorry http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/apologize#ixzz2DYNx8f3T www.FamilyFriendPoems.com Isabella Suppa Period 2 Response to Connor's poem: So far out of all of the poems, I enjoyed Connor's the most. I think that his got the point across the best because the poem speaks about the door being open and it being so dark. I could imagine that as meaning that the author was welcoming something so dark into his life. Something that was "so dark" and "so cold". And now he apoligizes for that. He acts as if he is sorry that he welcomed something so dark into his life. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this poem. Isabella Suppa Period 2
Today i tookthe carthat was inthe garageand realizedyou might have neededit to travel to workForgive meit was so funwhat a crazy joyride-Maxine H P2So far i think i like cassidy's poem the best, even better than the original one we looked at. I like it because it has a rhythm and flows very well, and also the fact that it rhymes makes it cool too and you can tell that she probably took some time on it because it makes sense and it also rhymes, something that i find hard to do right on the spot. And it seems like she took a personal experience and then wrote about it too which i liked.
HomeworkI didn’t domy homeworkthat wasdue todayand nowI will probablyFfailthis classForgive meI had betterthingsto doAnna B., period 2I agree that Cassidy’s poem is very good and she put a lot of effort into it, but it doesn’t really follow the example. Personally, I like Maxine’s poem the best. It is kind of funny and I can relate to it.
Too many testsI didn't study for my testthat I tooktodayand nowI will no longerhave an A+Forgive meAP Psychis moreimportantPersonally, I like Cassidy's poem better than "This is Just to Say" because it sounds a lot more sophisticated and thoughtful. You can tell she really took time to write it, where as the example we read seems like it could've been written by a kid in elementary school. Katlyn G. Period 2
I took yourlaptop fora schoolproject yesterdayand happenedto see your passwordfor your emailand FacebookForgive meI think youshould probablychange them nowI really like Cassidy’s poem as it seems that she wrote it very well and got the point of expanding from the idea that was given by Williams’ poem. The other poems that were quite fun to me were Anna’s and Katlyn’s as they both are what I can relate with because we get tons of homework, but we can’t always do all of it because of all the activities that most do after school that take a while.Quinn Bohan - Period 2
In my earlier post, I commented on Connor's poem and mistakenly posted an apology poem off of the internet. After coming back and reading some I realized I misunderstood the assignment.. So here is my OWN made poem: Forgive Me Now. Forgive me nowfor all the wrong I have done. Forgive me now for the whole lump sum. I am aware of all my wrong doings and promise to never repeat them, I swear I am done. Forgive me now for all that I have done. -------- Sorry for the confusion Mrs.Baker!! Isabella S. Period 2
I didn't dothe homeworkfor classdue todayForgive me,it was hardand it tooktoo much timeI'm sorrythat I really just like tosleepRebecca W.
I'm Sorry For Being DifferentI don't eat meat...Just something weirdthat makes me feeldiscrete.We don't have the sameopinions.Completely different beilefs.You can eat your burger,but I ain't touching that beef.You can say I'm weirdor how I'm completelybizarre.I'm sorry for beingdifferent.But hey, most of us are. I liked Katlyn's poem more than the original one we looked at because I can relate to it. I also thought Cassidy's poem and could tell she put a lot of effort into it. Julia's poem also stood out to me because it was short and sweet, which is what prefer when reading poetry. Morgan L p.2
please forgive mefor not comingto class today.I know thatI may come toclass late everydaybut try to understandI cannot resistsleeping in anextra 10 minutes.I would rather belaying in a bed than sitting at a desk.please forgive mefor choosing my bed over class. next time I'm lateI'll just get a pass. I really liked Cassidy's poem. I think she did a really good job writing it and it sounded very poetic. Hers was also more detailed than the original poem. Cassidy's poem was 100 times better than "This is just to say". This is just to say was a kind of goofy poem and Cassidy's was much more thoughtful and meaningful.Jackie W. p.2
Mom, it was me.Your carHas a dentin the back.I hit A pole at the mallIt's bad Really badI'm so sorryTell dad it was Bit And callGiovanni-Brian Fitter Period 2 November 30, 2012