tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post2398348921543639073..comments2024-02-10T04:59:03.138-05:00Comments on Mrs. Baker's English Classes: Poem of the Week- Period 2Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16639907284018599784noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-10131204513812148292012-11-30T08:37:48.925-05:002012-11-30T08:37:48.925-05:00Mom, it was me.
Your car
Has a dent
in the back.
...Mom, it was me.<br /><br />Your car<br />Has a dent<br />in the back.<br /><br />I hit <br />A pole at the mall<br />It's bad <br />Really bad<br /><br />I'm so sorry<br />Tell dad it was Bit <br />And call<br />Giovanni<br /><br />-Brian Fitter Period 2 November 30, 2012<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-88382547787085972642012-11-29T22:26:03.351-05:002012-11-29T22:26:03.351-05:00please forgive me
for not coming
to class today.
I...please forgive me<br />for not coming<br />to class today.<br />I know that<br />I may come to<br />class late everyday<br />but try to understand<br /><br />I cannot resist<br />sleeping in an<br />extra 10 minutes.<br />I would rather be<br />laying in a bed than <br />sitting at a desk.<br /><br />please forgive me<br />for choosing my <br />bed over class. <br />next time I'm late<br />I'll just get a pass.<br /> <br />I really liked Cassidy's poem. I think she did a really good job writing it and it sounded very poetic. Hers was also more detailed than the original poem. Cassidy's poem was 100 times better than "This is just to say". This is just to say was a kind of goofy poem and Cassidy's was much more thoughtful and meaningful.<br /><br />Jackie W. p.2Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-46391867614636301562012-11-29T21:43:31.144-05:002012-11-29T21:43:31.144-05:00I'm Sorry For Being Different
I don't eat...I'm Sorry For Being Different<br /><br />I don't eat meat...<br />Just something weird<br />that makes me feel<br />discrete.<br /><br />We don't have the same<br />opinions.<br />Completely different beilefs.<br />You can eat your burger,<br />but I ain't touching <br />that beef.<br /><br />You can say I'm weird<br />or how I'm completely<br />bizarre.<br />I'm sorry for being<br />different.<br />But hey, most of us are. <br /><br />I liked Katlyn's poem more than the original one we looked at because I can relate to it. I also thought Cassidy's poem and could tell she put a lot of effort into it. Julia's poem also stood out to me because it was short and sweet, which is what prefer when reading poetry. <br /><br />Morgan L p.2Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-7966056319697334192012-11-29T21:24:23.409-05:002012-11-29T21:24:23.409-05:00I didn't do
the homework
for class
due today
...I didn't do<br />the homework<br />for class<br />due today<br /><br />Forgive me,<br />it was hard<br />and it took<br />too much time<br /><br />I'm sorry<br />that I really <br />just like to<br />sleep<br /><br />Rebecca W.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-16068643199624348682012-11-29T21:13:14.832-05:002012-11-29T21:13:14.832-05:00In my earlier post, I commented on Connor's po...In my earlier post, I commented on Connor's poem and mistakenly posted an apology poem off of the internet. After coming back and reading some I realized I misunderstood the assignment.. So here is my OWN made poem: <br /><br />Forgive Me Now. <br /><br />Forgive me now<br />for all the wrong I <br />have done. <br /><br />Forgive me now for <br />the whole lump sum. <br /><br />I am aware of all my <br />wrong doings and <br />promise to never <br />repeat them, I swear <br />I am done. <br /><br />Forgive me now <br />for all that I have done. <br /><br />-------- <br /><br />Sorry for the confusion Mrs.Baker!! <br /><br />Isabella S. <br />Period 2 <br /> Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-79100554639454888032012-11-29T20:35:51.865-05:002012-11-29T20:35:51.865-05:00I took your
laptop for
a school
project yesterday
...I took your<br />laptop for<br />a school<br />project yesterday<br /><br />and happened<br />to see your password<br />for your email<br />and Facebook<br /><br />Forgive me<br />I think you<br />should probably<br />change them now<br /><br />I really like Cassidy’s poem as it seems that she wrote it very well and got the point of expanding from the idea that was given by Williams’ poem. The other poems that were quite fun to me were Anna’s and Katlyn’s as they both are what I can relate with because we get tons of homework, but we can’t always do all of it because of all the activities that most do after school that take a while.<br /><br />Quinn Bohan - Period 2Quinn Bohannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-9591771643759316492012-11-29T15:44:36.005-05:002012-11-29T15:44:36.005-05:00Too many tests
I didn't study
for my test
th...Too many tests<br /><br />I didn't study <br />for my test<br />that I took<br />today<br /><br />and now<br />I will no longer<br />have an A+<br /><br />Forgive me<br />AP Psych<br />is more<br />important<br /><br />Personally, I like Cassidy's poem better than "This is Just to Say" because it sounds a lot more sophisticated and thoughtful. You can tell she really took time to write it, where as the example we read seems like it could've been written by a kid in elementary school. <br /><br />Katlyn G. Period 2Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-10330090927455233292012-11-29T09:34:32.346-05:002012-11-29T09:34:32.346-05:00Homework
I didn’t do
my homework
that was
due tod...Homework<br /><br />I didn’t do<br />my homework<br />that was<br />due today<br /><br />and now<br />I will probably<br />Ffail<br />this class<br /><br />Forgive me<br />I had better<br />things<br />to do<br />Anna B., period 2<br />I agree that Cassidy’s poem is very good and she put a lot of effort into it, but it doesn’t really follow the example. Personally, I like Maxine’s poem the best. It is kind of funny and I can relate to it.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-62252711856645256672012-11-29T08:52:55.626-05:002012-11-29T08:52:55.626-05:00Today i took
the car
that was in
the garage
and r...Today i took<br />the car<br />that was in<br />the garage<br /><br />and realized<br />you might have needed<br />it to travel to work<br /><br />Forgive me<br />it was so fun<br />what a <br />crazy joyride<br /><br />-Maxine H P2<br /><br />So far i think i like cassidy's poem the best, even better than the original one we looked at. I like it because it has a rhythm and flows very well, and also the fact that it rhymes makes it cool too and you can tell that she probably took some time on it because it makes sense and it also rhymes, something that i find hard to do right on the spot. And it seems like she took a personal experience and then wrote about it too which i liked.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-54390979394599666702012-11-28T16:05:27.661-05:002012-11-28T16:05:27.661-05:00Sorry
© Whitestar
I love you so very much,
Even th...Sorry<br />© Whitestar<br />I love you so very much,<br />Even thou at times I do things that hurt,<br />I try so hard to hope that you always see,<br />How much you being in my life means to me,<br />I am sorry yet again for causing you pain, <br />that is the last thing I ever wanted to do,<br />Even when I am trying to look out for you and do the right thing <br />I mess up, I am sorry for that too.<br />I hope that you still know how much I love and cherish you,<br />Like nothing else in my life gives me the trill of being loved by you.<br />So I hope that you listen and see it in my eyes, <br />this sincere apology that comes with tears from deep inside.<br /><br /><br />Source: Apologize Poem, Sorry http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/apologize#ixzz2DYNx8f3T <br />www.FamilyFriendPoems.com <br /><br />Isabella Suppa Period 2 <br /><br />Response to Connor's poem: <br /><br />So far out of all of the poems, I enjoyed Connor's the most. I think that his got the point across the best because the poem speaks about the door being open and it being so dark. I could imagine that as meaning that the author was welcoming something so dark into his life. Something that was "so dark" and "so cold". And now he apoligizes for that. He acts as if he is sorry that he welcomed something so dark into his life. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this poem. <br /><br />Isabella Suppa Period 2Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-14117305377375899462012-11-28T08:57:43.629-05:002012-11-28T08:57:43.629-05:00Not Perfect
Im sorry
for not being perfect
for not...Not Perfect<br />Im sorry<br />for not being perfect<br />for not listening<br />for not loving you<br />as much as i should<br />forgive me<br /><br />Julia Watsky P2<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-39025841059377502072012-11-28T08:49:27.411-05:002012-11-28T08:49:27.411-05:00I personally like Cassidy's poem better than &...I personally like Cassidy's poem better than "This Is Just To Say." Cassidy's sounds more sophisticated and has more meaning to it. The one we read is, as Conor said, something a 5 year old could write. Conor's poem sounds more like he is sorry than the example, but overall, Cassidy's is very deep and clever. <br /><br />Rebecca W. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-15108610309339014952012-11-27T19:14:29.852-05:002012-11-27T19:14:29.852-05:00Fair Warning
I have opened
the door
that was
... Fair Warning <br /><br /><br />I have opened <br />the door<br />that was <br />in the basement<br /><br />That said <br />keep out<br />But I <br />just couldnt <br /><br />I'm sorry<br />do you forgive me<br />so dark<br />so cold<br /><br />Conor Smith P2<br />sorry i forgot the title in the first postAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-55580037008531526212012-11-27T19:12:43.350-05:002012-11-27T19:12:43.350-05:00Cassidy's poem had a cool rhythm, but was noth...Cassidy's poem had a cool rhythm, but was nothing like the example. I did not know what you wanted the poem to look like, but Cassidy's poem was deffinetly clever. Every person has a differnt poetic side to them, but no offense "This is just to say" poem was something a 5 year old could think of. I personally think Cassidy's poem was 10 times better.<br /><br /><br /><br />Conor Smith P2Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-54555822733411261242012-11-27T19:04:20.251-05:002012-11-27T19:04:20.251-05:00I have opened
the door
that was
in the basement
...I have opened <br />the door<br />that was <br />in the basement<br /><br />That said <br />keep out<br />But I <br />just couldnt <br /><br />I'm sorry<br />do you forgive me<br />so dark<br />so cold<br /><br />Conor Smith P2<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33822704.post-7695403752514641722012-11-27T17:57:59.683-05:002012-11-27T17:57:59.683-05:00SORROW
I just feel so much guilt,
That my words ...SORROW<br /><br />I just feel so much guilt, <br />That my words and actions built. <br />I know, what I did was wrong, <br />Tried to avoid it, and be strong. <br /><br />Following me has been the truth, <br />It was hurting like a noose. <br />I could not deny, <br />Not apologizing was a lie. <br /><br />I'm so sorry, from deep inside, <br />Clearly guilty, my hands are tied. <br />It was obviously, all my fault, <br />I'm sorry I have came to a hault.<br /><br />Cassidy M P2Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com