Monday, May 19, 2008

Writing the Paper: The Introduction

Introduction Due: Tuesday, May 27th

The helpful information below is taken from Mr. Malley's Class Blog:
http://rm305.blogspot.com/

The iSearch paper is different from your standard research paper because it demands "processing information and compellingly communicating [this information]." Compelling means evoking interest in a powerful, irrestistable way. In other words, your content is good, and your storytelling is even better. The storytelling begins in your introductory section, which is usually 3/4 to 1.5 pages.

A good introductory section usually answers three questions:
* How did you become interested in the topic? - tell a story. What happened in your life that made you want to investigate abandoned houses and their effect on a neighborhood? What made you interested in school violence? Self Mutilation? Pull your reader in by making it relevant.
* What do you know about the topic already? What do you assume?
* What is the specific question you will be trying to answer?

The most successful introductory sections will devote one or more paragraphs to the first question, one or more paragraphs to the second section, and get to the research question in the last paragraph.

Click below for a sample from one of Mr. Malley's students at Mack High in Buffalo, NY.
http://rm305.blogspot.com/2007/04/isearch-introductions.html

3 comments:

  1. 1. What exactly happens to the baby if the mother smokes?
    2. Is there a higher risk for the baby to be a smoker later on?
    3. Can the baby get any diseases as a result of the mother smoking?
    4. Could it kill the baby?
    5. How can you give up smoking right away if you are addicted?
    6. What happens to the baby affected by nicotine after it is born?
    7. What does the nicotine do to the baby?
    8. Can second hand smoke be just as harmful to the baby?
    9. Does smoking during pregnancy hurt the mother as well (high blood pressure etc.)
    10. Does the amount of cigarettes smoked make a difference, or is it equally harmful no matter how many? ( a few vs a pack)

    BF per3

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  3. Mrs.Baker,

    Site looks great. I'm going to be coming back here for some minilesson help next year. I'm following along as I try to grow and understand how to integrate research into online, connected writing.

    Enjoy the rest of your year!

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